Thought Process

Emotional tantrums
This tempest heart
Abysmal in feeling
Inspirations counterpart
My thoughts abound
Temporarily abstract
Awaiting expression
Matter meet fact

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I see too many reflections of normal day life with a simple thought that speaks volumes.

[Blue]

Wow, Keely. I read this twice and understood it better the second time. It makes sense and I am impressed that you were able to write about such a complex theme.

[Mary Christabel George]

Emotional journey.... well expressed.

[AWSklavos]

Enjoyed this one. Short, nice, doesn't spoil things by lingering over them too long, flows well and succinct. Thank you again for sharing your work.

[Rita L. Sev]

A brief piece that packs a punch... well crafted, Keely.

[Inda]

Love this! Short and yet, says so much about your creAtive process, fantastic!

[Frieda P]

So simple yet such convoluted feelings. Nice thought process going here Keely.

[Simon Welsh]

The heart is a b***h. Nicely written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sharp and precise thoughts. Give a lot to think about.

[A. Amos]

I agree with my fellow reveiwers on this one