My Appraisal

My Appraisal

A Poem by KeelyJane

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Of all the things that sparkle

Of all the things that catch my eye

Your love is the twinkling star

That shines brightest in my sky

You are the light to all that shimmers

You are glitter

You are gold

You polish my heart like silver

Going once, twice, I’m sold

Like a diamond you’re my rock

Like a precious stone

You’re a keeper

You’re everything I’ve ever wanted

Only cheaper

One in a million

One of a kind

Worth more than millions

You’re one hell of a find

© 2013 KeelyJane


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I enjoyed reading Keely :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


this had a nice flow to it ... lovely piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awwww what a sweet romantic tribute to the one you love .It drips of sincerity and sugar and spice and everything nice.This one is really awesome and I absolutely love it!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Full of love and devotion Keely, the jewell metaphor has long been expounded as an expression of love. As verse this could well grace a Valentine's card albeit slightly too long.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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