My Appraisal

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Of all the things that sparkle

Of all the things that catch my eye

Your love is the twinkling star

That shines brightest in my sky

You are the light to all that shimmers

You are glitter

You are gold

You polish my heart like silver

Going once, twice, I’m sold

Like a diamond you’re my rock

Like a precious stone

You’re a keeper

You’re everything I’ve ever wanted

Only cheaper

One in a million

One of a kind

Worth more than millions

You’re one hell of a find

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

Marvelous write,Keely Jane! Only one word you used, broke the spell that your poem had put me in! When you said 'Only (cheaper)'! Now, I now that it fits the poem and all that but, the word cheaper and its
connotation spoiled the mood that your poem had inspired.
Am I being picky here? Probably. You are very good at your craft KeelyJane!

[TL Boehm]

This is a wonderful write.

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

This is really good, KJ. Impressed :)

[Gedalya]

There are a lot of good lines here. Most of which, I'm scratching my head as to why I didn't think of them! lol

[A. Amos]

One in a million
One of a kind
Worth more than millions
You’re one hell of a find

Impressing must be one lucky guy, he should feel very proud:)

[Inda]

A nice change of pace from you, a side we don't often see. Thanks for sharing auch a sweet poem!

[KeelyJane]

Lol. This is true. I do often write of the darker truths

[gombeggar]

these words read very well...it all has a nice flow 2 it

[MsJewel]

Sweet and romantic. I love the light hearted feel of this romantic little gem!

:) Julie

[Mark]

a bright and energetic write.

[Simon Welsh]

Beautiful. Very nice write!