Bloody Knows

Bloody Knows

A Poem by KeelyJane

Her insides bleed a thousand voices
screaming red, unheard
She's hemorrhaging her feelings
dying with internal word
Behind her flesh walls
where the unspoken flows
Only the bloody knows

© 2019 KeelyJane


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Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is almost disgusting. LOL But really it could be the rawness of this piece that gives me that feeling, made me kind cringe a little, which means this was very effective!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jesus, the pain...
And I know... This viciousness of this poem slammed into my heart, as short as it was. It takes true skill to portray such emotion in so few words. Thank you for sharing the bloody truth of pain.

Koodoos

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like everything about this piece - it flows so well. Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love your writing. Through pain we express.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

One could feel the warm and steaming flow come down the neck. Nice job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hemorrhaging her feelings. Such a powerful phrase this is.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The dying of words unheard, listening intently seems to go over most heads, these screams are loud and clear, good one Keely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bleeding bloody good...Bravo..........

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"The Blood is the life..."

An eerie, creepy, yet strangely introspective piece. I wonder what type of blade was used to unearth what was inside...Or was it not a blade, but love?

Thought provoking and descriptive.

I liked it.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece here, but I really like it :) The title kind of prepares us, haha. It's scary to know that a human is only just skin, bone and blood. Slice us open and we continue to bleed. We are never safe for too long.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 1, 2013
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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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