Her insides bleed a thousand voices screaming red, unheard She's hemorrhaging her feelings dying with internal word Behind her flesh walls where the unspoken flows Only the bloody knows
Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more
This is almost disgusting. LOL But really it could be the rawness of this piece that gives me that feeling, made me kind cringe a little, which means this was very effective!
Jesus, the pain...
And I know... This viciousness of this poem slammed into my heart, as short as it was. It takes true skill to portray such emotion in so few words. Thank you for sharing the bloody truth of pain.
An eerie, creepy, yet strangely introspective piece. I wonder what type of blade was used to unearth what was inside...Or was it not a blade, but love?
Interesting piece here, but I really like it :) The title kind of prepares us, haha. It's scary to know that a human is only just skin, bone and blood. Slice us open and we continue to bleed. We are never safe for too long.
I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions.
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