Breath of Death

I exhaled a piece of me when I let you go,
my heart be my breath

I gasped for your love,
I breathed it to death

I inhale the cold and emptiness,
fill my lungs in chest

The air of goodbye,
suffocate this love for the best

Reviews

[Simon Welsh]

Ready for Drowning. Nice poem.

[B-poet]

An very emotional & powerful poem. Loved the written form & theme all throughout this fine write. Great work my fellow collaborator. A compelling read. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Heavy with plenty of raw emotion. Good one

[TL Boehm]

the air of good bye....of death. Of loss - a relevant write.

[Rita L. Sev]

Simple and sorrowful - goodbye is like a pillow that smothers in our sleep...

[Mark]

Loss sometimes makes you feel like you can't breath. Nice poem :)

[writing mojo]

vented pieces to say with wind of such powerful heart filled weather...great piece

[Trace]

Sometimes saying goodbye is hard to do when you can't breathe. Trace

[Mizo4]

nice write- eerie emotions expressed well. bien

[Sami Khalil]

A dark poem but sooo good...:)