Vertigo Masquerade

This is a collaborated piece between myself and Bpoet.

A phantom of the vespers

    my vertigo psyche emerges
         unveiling the vagaries of my mood
Unsuited for a pedestal

     too proud to frolic equal ground
           please pardon my intrepid intrude

Maybe once in a lifetime

     will you encounter such a vixen

            a force that may or may not hurt you

I like the depths of my intentions

      mysterious deep and wide 

             shallows not one of my virtues

Perhaps vicarious

      motive is always an intrigue

              ulterior or otherwise

In the foreshadow of my wayward presence

      there is reason

              the mask of all surprise

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Why do i get the feeling we once sat across from one another in a game of Black Jack Tennessee, its a fun game. Every card dealt, you take a shot, every chip, another shot. But there is always one clear mind. And Miss Keely Jane, i think you just hit Black Jack.

[B-poet]

Loved the way our collaboration turned out. It's a newly defined depth of profound written eloquence coming from two distinctive talents. Great working with you KeelyJane. Our work is a masterpiece that remains in a class of its own. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Deja vu! (just read this on BP's page...)

I enjoyed the juicy vocabulary in this piece, and the rhythm of the stanzas. Great collaboration!

[Jack...]

This is so very cool. Great job to both of you. Seamless, dark and a wild romp for me. Nicely done.

[Frieda P]

Wooo...Very awesome, I don't use that word much but it so applies here, a totally different kind of collaboration, I really enjoyed this dark side. You both did an amazing job, kudos!