Universeless
A Poem by
KeelyJane
© 2013 KeelyJane
Reviews
Artistically presented, and the wording gives a real sense of falling into a void...
Posted 11 Years Ago
I loved how you wrote this piece to start with. I love the emotion packed with this piece... Another thing I loved how you wrote it on the picture. The picture goes great with the meaning of the poem... Great job all the way around...
Posted 11 Years Ago
I loved how you wrote this piece to start with. I love the emotion packed with this piece... Another thing I loved how you wrote it on the picture. The picture goes great with the meaning of the poem... Great job all the way around...
All lovely and interesting even the structure...:)
Thank you for sharing...:)......................
Posted 11 Years Ago
All lovely and interesting even the structure...:)
Thank you for sharing...:)......................
Interesting structure. I like.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Interesting structure. I like.
Dark and ominous is the feel of this piece. Your friend in words, Pete
Posted 11 Years Ago
Dark and ominous is the feel of this piece. Your friend in words, Pete
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow the void is really felt in this piece, formatting adds to that feeling of darkly clouds in that space of emptiness, well done Keely.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow the void is really felt in this piece, formatting adds to that feeling of darkly clouds in that space of emptiness, well done Keely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 21, 2013
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KeelyJane Albuquerque, NM
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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions.
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