Universeless

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

You write of a space that is now just universally sad! Can there be a reversal of fortune or is this eternal? I would hate to think the latter because everyone has a RIGHT to find or at least be allowed the RIGHT to search for happiness in their allotted time. Sad write but, good as usual KJ!

[ClockWork GRIMM]

man I really like this here... it reminds me of a scarlet story I wrote on my page called white pony 1 and 2... especially like that line, blown out my stars.. check some of mine out and give me your thoughts... id love to hear them.. don't be afraid step outside the box and even run from it like f*****g bloody murder... with the stars blown out we hold the candles to guide and may the bridges we burn light the way

[Astro]

Great stuff KJ, I like the format and the content, using the celestial to express the 'inner'. Well done.

[gombeggar]

interesting presentation over the pic here...love the spacing and the words themselves here 2...nice

[Inda]

Love the nostalgia and the angst in this piece. Great job!

[TL Boehm]

Such a sad write. The emptiness is a tangible thing in this piece.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Just a state of emptiness remains. I know the feeling well. A very deep and raw write.

[Jack...]

Very sad my friend, no light lives when the heart is broken.

[kublakhan27]

The last five lines/words reflect how I feel in my most intense states of resignation...a very poignant write, well done.

[larryb]

Clever interesting write...well done.