Got Glitter

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*                Shine                *

 Reflect

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My scrapes reveal my sparkle

I have glitter in my veins

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Bleeding out and listening

*               To the beating of my star               *

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*               Still glistening             *

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Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

How the HELL did you manage to format this? It's so awesome and intriguing. A little bit on the small side with the font side but I think it reinforces that message you're trying to send (maybe just a tiny bit bigger?). Anyways, loved how you formatted it and loved the short but very personal poem!

[Jack...]

A star is born. Very cool KJ.

[Rita L. Sev]

"My scrapes reveal my sparkle..." I like that idea...

I like the clever form here, Keely.

[Jonathan Biswell]

like how you added the glitter

[Frieda P]

What a unique presentation & the thought process behind it fits perfectly Keely.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

We are made of stardust. Excellent read and write.

[KurKota]

Clever construction....:)