Got Glitter

Got Glitter

A Poem by KeelyJane

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*                Shine                *

 Reflect

*      Twinkle     *

*         Sprinkled blood stains        *

My scrapes reveal my sparkle

I have glitter in my veins

****     Dripping drops   ****    Diamond like     ****

Bleeding out and listening

*               To the beating of my star               *

*     Somehow     *

*               Still glistening             *

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© 2013 KeelyJane


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How the HELL did you manage to format this? It's so awesome and intriguing. A little bit on the small side with the font side but I think it reinforces that message you're trying to send (maybe just a tiny bit bigger?). Anyways, loved how you formatted it and loved the short but very personal poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very effective design for a very effective poem! Your talent precedes you nicely. By the way, are you bleeding here in color perhaps, helps my mental imagery! Forgive me if I am not my usual loquacious self. I have just read another of your poems and I am relaxing after a stunning mental erection!

Posted 9 Years Ago


How the HELL did you manage to format this? It's so awesome and intriguing. A little bit on the small side with the font side but I think it reinforces that message you're trying to send (maybe just a tiny bit bigger?). Anyways, loved how you formatted it and loved the short but very personal poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glitter....Very reflective words, illuminating your inner being. Nicely written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I have to give you props for the design and the verse with this one...the title fits this to a tee...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

highly creative the presentation as well as the content. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great concept and beautiful format. I like it, even if it describes blood and scars you have found a way to make it emotionally and visually valid.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creative. Great poem and loved the style.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha! Great write! I love what you did with the stars!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A= for creativity Keely... loved the style form and presentation. font is a bit too small for me on this laptop.. Great job. shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very creative write...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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