Save The Last Word For Me

Like a two steppin' tongue tango
Our 'I love you's' danced
Words can find rhythm
When hearts are less advanced

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love how short and simple this appears, and yet behind every line is a deeper meaning. The dance metaphor is beautifully crafted throughout the poem. I love the play on "Save the last dance for me" as you use it -- "Save the last word for me" well done!

[Mary Christabel George]

Awww.. this is so sweet.
"Words can find rhythm
When hearts are less advanced'
Kisses :)

[Mark]

Less advanced, as they have a better chance to find that special synchronicity. Nicely crafted.

[TL Boehm]

words can find rhythm when hearts are less advanced. Lovely

[Ency Bearis]

Meaningful sort of relationship and you're right it takes two to tango to be in synchronized

[Leonard Birch]

A beautifully written work. Thank you for sharing.
Cheers

[Astro]

Brief yet eloquent, such sweet metaphor and sentiment felt like honey on the tongue and danced upon the heart.

[Aethereal]

Words also enjoy doing the fox trot together. I enjoyed your tango dance metaphor here.

Each of their dance steps advance
as hearts follow Cupid's darts.

[Tarry Franck]

Dance my friend in the tango of love. Great piece. Truly enjoyed reading it

[gombeggar]

interesting notion...I would think it would be reverse 'when hearts are more advanced' perhaps i'm missing something

[KeelyJane]

It's about saying I love you but not actually being in love

[Mark]

very nice. the dance of the love proclamations. :)