We Wisdom

We Wisdom

A Poem by KeelyJane
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There is something to be said about collaboration, the union of talent. Different ingredients making art from scratch. I'll begin with an opening stanza. Please let your comment be your addition...

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Slip into my mind sometime
 try it on for size
Albeit too big or too small
once worn you're twice wise

© 2013 KeelyJane


Author's Note

KeelyJane
There is something to be said about collaboration, the union of talent.
Different ingredients making art from scratch.
I'll begin with an opening stanza. Please let your comment be your addition to this pie

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Here you will find a symbolic union,
where art imitates life, and life is confusion.
Understand the differences, relish the unique--
sit down on these rocks and sip from this creek,
where knowledge is power, weilded with a pen
and no one by you and me knows where this will end...

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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An intellectual enterprise
Is what we're trying
To build here representing
A clear defining moment
Forever linking countless
Creative wordsmiths
For the sake of
Wonderfully Evident written Wisdom (W.E. Wisdom)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slip into my mind sometime,
Try it for five
Albeit light or dark
Then writhe or thrive

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I follow no rhyme or reason
lead by my desires
I hide in deceptions closet
left in loves disguise

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will slip into yours, as you slip into mine
let all the neurons intertwine
wisdom won is but half
to use it wisely is the catch

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slip into my mind sometime
try it on for size
Albeit too big or too small
once worn you're twice wise

I'll shadow your thinking
and early morn dream
analyse your intention
your secretive scheme;
I'll step into your mind
for a second - three or four,
vanish or hover
in a tomorrow or more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

our thoughts will meld together
behind wide open eyes
words of poetic fellowship
forever immortalized

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer's cafe is where
great minds meet
the talents of those
no one can defeat.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It will add another dimension
Give us depth of shared thought
A network of consciousness
Made whole by what we wrought


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Slip into my mind sometimes
if to slip is to become uttered through inadvertence.
If there is the slightest chance of freedom. If free
is fitness, the flecks of woven discovery.

If free is that which is able to turn in any direction.
If free is the long sleeve of better. If free desolves
unforgiving under the tongue like a blessed wafer
which distinguishes and consecrates the real presence
from the frozen.

If I can try on your head; if I can be you. Sometimes.
From the underside, the side with the spiritual padding.
Then to not hold on is the greatest risk, not you're tender
ghost scattering so that bodies lying behond

can be seen clearly and readily
understood.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You might not always understand
the power of your muse;
at times you'll have to take a stand,
you've got too much to lose.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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