The Last Stanza

The Last Stanza

A Poem by KeelyJane

I speak my life fluently
in semantics and rhyme
Every word part of my moments
Every letter, points in time

What I write is how I'm livin'
making' lifes lyrics up as I go
What I'm doin's ad-libbin'
Livin' with the flow

I converse in verse and rows
I am iamb
Pro of prose

Until the last stanza
Words aren't below me
To see me you must read me
To read me is to know me

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Unique and catchy... Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Well done, I wanted to break into a rap; clever play on words and very refreshing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, perfect out of place signifies desperation on their part or sales men with nothing to sell.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ad-libbin' is my middle name so, with this poem I can identify! Good poppin' piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are always oh so clever, Keely. I love your wit and your depth. They mold your work very well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A great way to define oneself as a poet, but also as someone who realizes like poetry life can be abstract and parallel at the same time and sometimes it just feels right just like a great line or rhyme.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If this was spoken word, I would drop the mic and walk away at the end, Cause the visual is painted by your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great piece and nicely presented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Nice and quick. Good rhymes

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unflinchingly witty, but with a lot of heart as well...I love this piece and how you've balanced both with seeming effortlessness...one of the more enjoyable pieces I've read in the last little while...great work Keely :)

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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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