Maverick

Under the lemon tinted morning sun
out in the fields of freedom
Dances the maverick
effortlessly perfecting her cantor
Running unbridled
without burden on her back
No saddle to seat a rider
Her only reins are her dreams
grazing on the passion inside her
She is free for the moment
and in this moment she runs wild
Wild and unrepaired
You'll never fix what can't be broken

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

This is beautiful. I came here because I saw you on the top of the pile and noticed you are from Alb? I work in Rio Rat Hole and reside in Bernalillo. Nice to see someone else here from the wild west.
And the name Keely...I have Keeley's in my family.
Anyway. You'll never fix what can't be broken. Awesome line.

[Leigh]

Id love to be that horse. If dreams are her only barrier then she is truly free

[Aethereal]

This poem presents an elegant metaphor for freedom. It's much better to work in one's own garden than to be forced to work in someone else's garden. We're all born wild, but tyrants are always trying to make us conform to their self-serving standards.

[Bare Trees]

The harmony of your words together is impressive. This is a well written poem I enjoyed.

[Marie]

"You'll never fix what can't be broken." What an excellent line.

[Perkele.7885]

I was caught right away by your illusion that a female could be a maverick! For some reason, I never considered a mare wearing that mantle. I have been informed in good form by your poem of unbridled freedom!

[Shweta Singh]

Such a powerful write!every single expression is so efficacious...It can imbibe one with those true values what a good poetry ought to.

[lee von cleef]

And the cowboy gave her rein ,let her run,and run she did stride for stride ears played back together they splashed across the dry rio grande.

[rhythm&blues]

I love horses and the message in this one, very nice.

[jinxxnij]

F*****g awesome! You are such a talented writer. Every piece of yours I read I'm in awe.