Come Together

Observe the substance that surrounds you
The depths and the shallows
Open your eyes to the mediocre
Trigger epiphany of the Hallows

Embrace everything as though it matters
Hold tight onto all things big and small
Absorb what you need into your empathy
Manifest into the mind of us all

A spoken word blossoms
The blooming of a common thought
Give back what you take in
Turn a little into a lot

Solitude darkens the spirit
Exposure brings the heart light
Shine your wisdom within us
Poets unite

Reviews

[Mother Maggie]

Beautiful work...the beauty, true beauty of the poet is the ability to express the inexpressible. I have a different perspective on 'solitude'. Solitude is the place we go to seek inner enlightenment--it is loneliness that darkens and desolates the soul.

Namaste and Blessed Be

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Possibly your best poem to date. This is a flowing, well constructed piece. A rallying call to all us writers!

[kublakhan27]

Every once in a while I come across a piece and am befuddled as to why it hasn't garnered more reviews, and this is one of those pieces...wonderful words here Keely...well done :)

[B-poet]

I love this poem. I've adding it to my favorites library. It reminds me of a battle cry for all kindred spirits to unite for one common cause. Great write. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Throughout the poem I was thinking, well this is all such good advice for everyone: observe, open your eyes, embrace... And then you brought it home. Keely, this piece takes us all gently by the hand and leads us into a poet's paradise!

[quinfinn]

gorgeous wisdom and subtle truth abound in this well worded and masterfully penned prose. well done, Keely Jane!