Come Together

Come Together

A Poem by KeelyJane

Observe the substance that surrounds you
The depths and the shallows
Open your eyes to the mediocre
Trigger epiphany of the Hallows

Embrace everything as though it matters
Hold tight onto all things big and small
Absorb what you need into your empathy
Manifest into the mind of us all

A spoken word blossoms
The blooming of a common thought
Give back what you take in
Turn a little into a lot

Solitude darkens the spirit
Exposure brings the heart light
Shine your wisdom within us
Poets unite


© 2013 KeelyJane


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Beautiful work...the beauty, true beauty of the poet is the ability to express the inexpressible. I have a different perspective on 'solitude'. Solitude is the place we go to seek inner enlightenment--it is loneliness that darkens and desolates the soul.

Namaste and Blessed Be

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sounds like the jingle for a Saturday morning cartoon show. Poets Unite!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! yes! yes! Poets Unite!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful work...the beauty, true beauty of the poet is the ability to express the inexpressible. I have a different perspective on 'solitude'. Solitude is the place we go to seek inner enlightenment--it is loneliness that darkens and desolates the soul.

Namaste and Blessed Be

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cool. I shall continue to drink in the world like tea savoring it's aroma and describing what is there in the leaves at the bottom of my minds cup.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poesy of wisdom, interesting and impressive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice little ditty...like the end...poets unite

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was realllllllllllllllllllllllllllly great....!!!!!
well done....!!!!!
:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KJ, my elusive friend, you speak volumes of truth in your work. Very nice indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amen!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. My favorite was the third stanza. The title made me think of the Beatles.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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