Come Together

Observe the substance that surrounds you
The depths and the shallows
Open your eyes to the mediocre
Trigger epiphany of the Hallows

Embrace everything as though it matters
Hold tight onto all things big and small
Absorb what you need into your empathy
Manifest into the mind of us all

A spoken word blossoms
The blooming of a common thought
Give back what you take in
Turn a little into a lot

Solitude darkens the spirit
Exposure brings the heart light
Shine your wisdom within us
Poets unite

Reviews

[Mother Maggie]

Beautiful work...the beauty, true beauty of the poet is the ability to express the inexpressible. I have a different perspective on 'solitude'. Solitude is the place we go to seek inner enlightenment--it is loneliness that darkens and desolates the soul.

Namaste and Blessed Be

[Perkele.7885]

Ah, come together, unite! Share this wonderful world of expression that is poetry. There are many treatments to this world of poetry, many methods to adhere to or my favorite, free verse. I say, 'it's all good when it is done well by the author and reads well to the reader. Nice job, KeelyJane!

[MagicAl]

Love this! Really beautiful and inspiring write. Thank you.

[Inda]

Assemble!

Couldn't help myself. Seriously, it's a great piece and it flows like water. Love it!

[AWSklavos]

"Poets unite", nice touch. I like this poem, to me it begs to be re-read in order for me to understand the coming together. This is quite a thought provoking poem and I think nicely done. Thank you for sharing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such a heartfelt plea.Yes we should all poets unite :)

[A. Amos]

Embrace everything as though it matters
Hold tight onto all things big and small
Absorb what you need into your empathy
Manifest into the mind of us all

Nice enjoyed your writing

[TL Boehm]

poets unite. This is a beautiful thought and a beautiful poem - the blooming of a common thought. Love that line.

[ANTO]

Ethereal and shamanic writing KJ - a true call to arms (though I know that 'arms' is in fact the pen)
Thanks for this gentle but rousing piece fellow poet and friend.
X

[Mark]

very nice, what would we accomplish by uniting you think?

[shallimarRose]

outstanding work with a message. Loved the first stanza the best but all strong. Rose