Lies in Passing

Lies in Passing

A Poem by KeelyJane

Hey, how ya doin'?
What's up?
How ya been?

What's new?
What's  good?
What's happenin'?

Could things be better?
Are you good?
Can't complain?

Better than ever?
So-so?
Same ol' same?

I'm great.
Not too much.
I've been doing just fine.

Nothin' new but the day.
Livin' Life.
Killin' time.

We assume no one cares
so we answer as expected.
Courteous questions
leave the truth neglected.

Lies in passing.
Not caring, just askin'.

© 2013 KeelyJane


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I like the flavor that reality leaves on my tongue as I salivate to your truisms in your Lies in Passing!
I tend to remain fleeting when I want to avoid such diminutive confrontations and I am a hard person to miss. No hiding behind a fence pole for me to remain unseen! But, then I do not need much more than a casual inquiry to kick start my mouth if I have already had my coffee! Just sayin'!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh so true indeed. We're all passing by saying these quotes to kill time when small talk is started by someone we really don't are for. Great job. Love the theme here. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just love this. Something I do without even thinking about it. But those canned
answers are certainly not counterfeit and not misleading but is a bridge that
lets you go on with your life without engagement. Saying to a stranger that "I
cant complain" doesn't mean that I wont......that is, if I know you....

nicely done,
dana

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this piece. So simple, so true and full of deep meaning. Great stuff

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sound familiar to me...oh yeah, it sounds like me. Very cool

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice flowing piece with another salient message

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are the common courtesies we've been taught, they don't, we don't really care most times, these questions are on auto pilot. Sometimes I prefer it to the intrusive questions that people think they have the right to ask. So, how ya doin?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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