Evolve

Monotony of emotion
Struggle and its acclivity
The abysmal reality
Of a heart in captivity
No acclimation
Symptoms vary
Tears frequent
Smiles arbitrary
Accretion ceased
Abate and absolve
Learn from
and Evolve

Reviews

[jinxxnij]

I really liked the format you used. great job poet.

[B-poet]

I hear you loud and clear in regards to this cleverly written poem. Monotony can be a boring experience if people aren't evolving for the benefit of their own futures. Great job here. :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love the build up of power and emotion that escalates with the size of the type to the ending final words "and Evolve" to match the title. Nicely done.

[Pete Langley]

I enjoy the progression, brevity and positivity - and I would probably - for me - have mafe it even briefer in the last two lines....."Learn / Evolve" P.

[Veronica Chandler]

I sincerely enjoy the way this piece grows in meaning at the same time as the font grows in size, it adds a lovely dimension to the piece.

[Frieda P]

Love the format and the message behind this one, very cleverly pen'd. Good one Keely, much enjoyed this read.

[Coyote Poetry]

We do evolve. The poem told a real story. We will change. Most times not for the better. Good to hold the hope of love and dreams of youth forever. Hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice piece!

[Tarry Franck]

I agree with John - very thought provoking piece - nicely done.

[Mary Christabel George]

The format is so lovely......
You are innovative Keely... as always....!