Beforecast

A tortured soul; imprisoned by recollection
Haunted by the happened
Nothing escapes; no sunlight gets through
In her finest hour, she says
 "This moment would make the perfect memory if it were raining"

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is a very interesting concept, i like the way it is worded and the length is perfect for the message. nicely done, Keely

[Pamela Pletz]

I like this. I am not a poetry expert, but like all art, it is personal!

[A. H. Pinley]

Rain is a soother. Nice poem!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This another new great write of yours. The emotion is flowing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely poignant little piece, loved 'imprisoned by recollection'
Hey and don't rub it in, it is snowing here on 24th March!

[B-poet]

Nice. The best poems are often times short, sweet, and to the point with their overall theme. Very gripping and profound. Great job. :)