Bad Breeze

Gotta have a little fun sometimes

Quickly in one ear
Out the other just as fast
Not a word is heard
Just the bad breeze blowing past
What you say is just a sound
A sound without song
Nothing I want to hear
I've heard it for so long
To speak to me
You must speak from heart
When you open your mouth
You might as well fart

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Keely, yes a fun piece indeed so I took the liberty of having fun with it.
In one ear
Out the other just as fast
Not a word is heard
Just the bad breeze blowing past
What you say is just a sound
A sound without a song
Not quite what I want to hear
I've heard it for too long
To speak to me
You must try to use your heart
For when you use your mouth
You might as well just fart

[jinxxnij]

Bahahahahah! You are too much! Love it!

[kublakhan27]

Haha very witty, and a stark contrast to the very heady stuff you've been producing lately...another sign of your poetic diversity...I like it, especially the last few lines :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest thoughts in the poem. Some people speak useless words. All we can do is smile and allow the words to disappear in the wind. A nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Whoa, fluent in sarcasm, I loved it. ;-)

[A. H. Pinley]

So blunt and straight forward.

[redflutterby]

Rotflmao.... this is flippant and perfect sarcasm!! Awesome!! ;-D