Leave Me Alone

This was the first poem I ever wrote. I was 16 years old. I knew nothing about Love.

You've burdened me with heartache
You've always come and go
There is nothing left for you to take
but the pain you've caused to grow
I've lost desire to find you
I'm better off on my own
I don't need what you put me through
So, Love leave me alone

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An excellent write for a sixteen year old!!!
Worth updating perhaps?
You've burdened me with heartache
You always come and go
There is nothing left for you to take
but the pain you've caused to grow
I've lost desire to find you
I'm better on my own
I need not what you put me through
So, Love leave me alone

[Melissa Sofia]

Great poem, direct and to the point and how I feel when I want to be left alone :)

[Renée]

wish I would have said that when I was 16... lol your a spitfire !

[quinfinn]

feels right to me.

[Mary Christabel George]

Its short but it says so much...
I Liked it :)

[A. H. Pinley]

Sounds like a teenager?

[Jack...]

This one definitely gets its point across. I really like the meter of this poem and the rhyme is sweet as well, It read very well. Nice one KJ

[Racy Daniel]

Oh, it's a very nice poem that you have written. I liked the title that you used in your poem. Keep writing more. All the best!!!