It's All You

I just want you to hold me, I want to feel my body in your arms
I want your embrace to embrace me;
your caress to caress to caress me;
your heart to love me;
your lips to taste me.

I just want you to feel me; the affection
the bond; the energy
Feel the chemistry of us; the connection.

I just want you to know my emotions
know my ins; my outs
I want you to know me.
I want you to know I want you.
I want you to know I need you.
I want you to know I know you; know you know me
and just be.

I just want my imagination.
I want what I ask for in dreams,
in prayers and in thought;
Us.
I want what I've got.

You're so perfect yet can seem ,still, so far.
You keep me wishing for what you are;
What you can be; what I remember;
What I have tasted; what you have shown me.
I want what you have planted in my mind as the way it should be.

I just want it all.
It's all you.

Author's Note

I wrote this as I posted it so it is completely unrevised and unedited. So, we'll see... :)

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok got the warning. Although I found it difficult to follow the rhyming pattern, this is another tremendously passionate piece with a tinge of desperation. It flows like water off glass until the penultimate stanza:
'You're so perfect yet can seem ,still, so far.
You keep me wishing for what you are;
What you can be; what I remember;
What I have tasted; what you have shown me.
I want what you have planted in my as the way it should be.'
Maybe:
'You're so perfect yet can still seem afar.
You keep me wishing for what you are;
What you can be; what I remember;
What I have tasted; what you have shown me.
I want what you have planted in me as what should be.'

[The 13th Eros]

Each lines dances free in your delight of passion.. of longing. You confess such a deep need for these two rivers of love to flow into one.. to surge and roar and melt in the heat of your giving.. taking.. wanting. Let it be.. yes, let it be, and be fulfilled forever. xx

[Lover Of Words]

Raw and honest!

[Gareth6d]

Love the rawness and how vulnerable you sound!

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is so raw and honest and so easy to relate to. I think girls want exactly what you wrote here but it's the one thing they never seem to get. I love it. Great write.

[Mary Christabel George]

Oh! So Love is in the air........1