Me + You

I tried counting the reasons I love you more each day

But I lost count at a million somewhere along the way

If I had to pick just one reason that makes you the one for me

It would be because my reasons go on and on endlessly

My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two

Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you

Reviews

[Joe]

Just Awesomeness Topped Keely!
I Adore This Poem So Much!
Me+You = A Thousand Worlds As It Is So Artfully Penned By You! Ahhh
I'm A Fan! :) xoxo

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"My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two
Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you"
/ Ahhhhh (sigh) x 100000000000 x 1000000000000000000! :)

[D.E. Walters]

Nicely written! It flows very nicely and is a wonderful expression of feeling. You have definitely struck heart chords with this one. Great job! :-)

[The 13th Eros]

Keep counting, sweet poet. Keep counting the depth of your love and the beauty of your passions. And as you do, you two will only grow closer, and your love deeper and stronger. That's my wish for you.. a love that is wildly alive always.

[quinfinn]

very clever write, Keely. methinks your muse is working overtime, and it is paying off with huge dividends! whatever is inspiring this outpouring of wonderful verse, don't stop it....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Me thinks Keely is infatuated and saturated in love!
This is another flowing and excellent poem. And boy are you writing it out at a pace!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I like this.

[kublakhan27]

It's so charming and innocent, but it's also a very succinct declaration of devotion...who would not want to have such a piece addressed to them? A refreshing piece of feelgood poetry :)

[redflutterby]

Awhhhhh....this is so incredibly sweet!! Im adding it to my favorites!! Love...love...love it!!