Me + You

Me + You

A Poem by KeelyJane

I tried counting the reasons I love you more each day

But I lost count at a million somewhere along the way

If I had to pick just one reason that makes you the one for me

It would be because my reasons go on and on endlessly

My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two

Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Joe
Just Awesomeness Topped Keely!
I Adore This Poem So Much!
Me+You = A Thousand Worlds As It Is So Artfully Penned By You! Ahhh
I'm A Fan! :) xoxo

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"My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two
Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you"
/ Ahhhhh (sigh) x 100000000000 x 1000000000000000000! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This must have been something I missed at some point, but I am glad you sent it too me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun flow, and a great message to a beloved! This would be the best Valentine message! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice addition here, Keely.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reads like a hallmark card...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful, short, sweet and to the point. I could see this one published and given to someones special all over the world. Thank you for sharing.

~Blessed Be

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a suggestion and you can take it or leave it. Maybe rework the lines so the numbers go in ascending order. I found it confusing that it went from million to one to two to thousand. JMO. Nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great equation of love :) nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a math lesson I liked. I hope the one you write this about knows how you feel, because if they do, then they would feel like I do reading this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Joe
Just Awesomeness Topped Keely!
I Adore This Poem So Much!
Me+You = A Thousand Worlds As It Is So Artfully Penned By You! Ahhh
I'm A Fan! :) xoxo

Fav Lines:

"My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two
Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you"
/ Ahhhhh (sigh) x 100000000000 x 1000000000000000000! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 20, 2013
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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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