Me + You

Me + You

A Poem by KeelyJane

I tried counting the reasons I love you more each day

But I lost count at a million somewhere along the way

If I had to pick just one reason that makes you the one for me

It would be because my reasons go on and on endlessly

My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two

Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Joe
Just Awesomeness Topped Keely!
I Adore This Poem So Much!
Me+You = A Thousand Worlds As It Is So Artfully Penned By You! Ahhh
I'm A Fan! :) xoxo

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"My love for you is infinite and my reasons are that times two
Multiplied a thousand times and the sum is me plus you"
/ Ahhhhh (sigh) x 100000000000 x 1000000000000000000! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i love it simplyyy its beautifulllll. i love ur calculation :D going to my favorites

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was very sweeett...
well done ...i liked how you used maths in that .
well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job. The second line is slightly confusing, but overall it's well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice bit of mathematical computation going on here! And these numbers are for you and your honey! Are they surpass-able if you were to meet someone as yet unknown to you? Just saying? Your male readership wants to know. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeelyJane

11 Years Ago

I suppose anything is possible ;)
nice bit here...well done write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You seriously could write Hallmark cards. You should look into it. No joke.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I just got a Nerd-boner. Very sweet and direct dedication that when read should = Hugs/Kisses

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love sucks :P This poem does not! It's pretty cool; I like the flow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This a very special, loving and heartfelt type of poem almost anyone can relate to. Great work. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great flow with rhyme scheme and notable content.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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