You, Me, Us

At times

So happy

Like children running wild and free

Impartial to the minutes, hours, days that pass so suddenly

Together in a world apart

A lovers sanctuary

The world of you and me

REAL

CONTENT

COMPLETE

At times

So blind

Like eyes without the light

Unable to recognize, realize, remedy the things cause a fight

Both our eyes blurred

Dark as night

Vision not right

RESENT

HURT

SPITE

At times

So sexual

Like primal porn stars

Passionately needing, wanting, endulging this chemistry of ours 

So into eachother

Deep spaces

Seeing stars

HARD

PASSION

LUST

At times

So perfect

Like the truth that sets us free

Connected souls, spirits, hearts beating simultaneously

One with eachother

Meant to be

Naturally

LOVE

ALWAYS

STRONG

Reviews

[ANTO]

I like the visual - like links in a chain which of course stanzas are with or without space.
Life is an ocean and love is a boat (sorry I took that from a fav song of mines but its applicable here KJ) and the voyage is never smooth. You captured real-life here.
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[Astro]

Interesting free verse with punctuation in the form of all caps emotion that take you to a place, as a fly on the wall of a passionate relationship. Well done.

[Ency Bearis]

nice poem and well penned

[TL Boehm]

love always strong. That's how it should be. Wonderful Poem.

[MoriartyMesa]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jEy6MGu3bIA



This is where my mind brought me before and after Porn Star Sex

[Simon Welsh]

Nice poem you have WRITTEN ;)

[Perkele.7885]

And to think; all this turbulence could be avoided if we would only embrace the concept of MELLOW!

[gombeggar]

lotsa feelings going on here...some very good lines

[B-poet]

This is a powerful & stunning write KeelyJane. Loved the format and the underlying message you've conveyed here. Great work. A riveting write & read. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

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