Likewise

Take all of my emotion
all my love
all my hate
all my fear
all my pain
Put it all together
in your mind
in your heart
in your life
Are we the same?

Reviews

[Yasmin]

We just might be since you know we are all made of the same clay :P

[Pete Langley]

I like the idea of the poem. The format is original as is the rhetoric of the question, but I feel it`s incomplete. I really feel it would have benefited from an expansion of the thought behind it. P.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Fundamentally we are all the same, yet on a deep level some are worlds apart. Nicely written.

[larryb]

No we are not the same...I have a outtie and you have a innie :)

[Eileenws]

Very pithy and to the point. I like the repetition of "all my" and "in you" Very creative piece.

[Jack...]

I'm sure

[Frieda P]

Mostly the same, a whole lot of different perspective probably. The only thing that divides us all is perception. Well said.

[A. H. Pinley]

You're original! One of a kind.

[p.kuhl]

We feel so distinct from one another but really we are all so similar, aren't we?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting and thought provoking piece which is well structured and to the point.