Beautiful in Mind

Beautiful in Mind

A Poem by KeelyJane

You won't remedy insecurities

by beating up the blind

Ugly is only ugly to those ugly in the mind

See the beauty in the beautiful

by being beautiful and kind

What's beautiful in your eyes

is beautiful in mine




© 2013 KeelyJane


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True words...this reminds me of my grandmother's favorite saying "Do unto others as you would have done unto yourself". I remember it always, even years after her first saying it to me. To be beautiful is to be compassionate, honest, open, and kind...sometimes, however, being such an open door invites in the theives and liars. Unfortunately, my internal "alarm system" is not so good in that regard. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Beauty is in the eye of the meek ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This could benefit from punctuation.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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another one of your writes well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True words...this reminds me of my grandmother's favorite saying "Do unto others as you would have done unto yourself". I remember it always, even years after her first saying it to me. To be beautiful is to be compassionate, honest, open, and kind...sometimes, however, being such an open door invites in the theives and liars. Unfortunately, my internal "alarm system" is not so good in that regard. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.......! Such a beautiful write.....:)
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this poem on positive attitude.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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True beauty is inside, those who say other wise are insecure about who they are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The only ugly people people are those who are ugly in the mind

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Short, sweet and oh so true!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow, very lovely and singular. I really enjoyed the rhythm, felt like a love song as I read it aloud. Sonically good, thematically strong. I would like to see one example of beauty more specifically so you can define the abstraction (beauty) as something tangible, as opposed to keeping it abstract and vague. Lovely write--!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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