Too Long

Too Long

A Poem by KeelyJane

Everything about you

drives me up the wall

If I had to count the ways

I couldn't count them all

Our steps are not in sync

we don't see eye to eye

If I'm a bird you're a fish

I can't swim and you can't fly

If its not one thing its another

our conflicts are never ending

We're rarely ever happy

if we act like it, we're pretending

The difference between

what I want and what you don't

What I want is change

and that’s something that you won't

Why try to compromise

and settle for what we know is wrong

And draw out any longer

what’s already gone on for too long

© 2013 KeelyJane


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sometimes if we try to change another to accomodate our needs and wants...we make them into something so different than who they are, we might not like what they've become...and wish them back to the original form.

relationships can get to this unhappiness..and if so..it seems all the working in the world will never bring back the comfort and love once felt.

in the one line "if it's not one thing it's another..."

another really poignant piece from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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sometimes if we try to change another to accomodate our needs and wants...we make them into something so different than who they are, we might not like what they've become...and wish them back to the original form.

relationships can get to this unhappiness..and if so..it seems all the working in the world will never bring back the comfort and love once felt.

in the one line "if it's not one thing it's another..."

another really poignant piece from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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