Great thoughts, I think I've read something along the same lines from you or another writer on here before. No matter, it is thought provoking and real. In this line it seemed to me that you were either missing an 'a' or, maybe just didn't notice anything off. "Maybe my minds travels went little bit too far" So, after 'went' you need an 'a' or, better yet perhaps, take out 'little' and add 'just a'. Just a suggestion, still a great write.
It hard to fathom that we only use 10% of our actual brain mass! I wonder why that is. Perhaps their are areas of the brain that are unsuitable for connectivity. I do not know, just guessing here. There is so much that we do not know; far, surpasses what we do know. But, you are not crazy girl cause I understand you and I am in tip top Freudian shape!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
The "we use ten percent of our brain" is completely untrue. In reality, we use one hundred percent o.. read moreThe "we use ten percent of our brain" is completely untrue. In reality, we use one hundred percent of our brains. We just use them when we do different things. This ten percent thing is really getting old. And, please, don't think I'm being rude or anything. I just felt I should point that out. Or, you can check the all-powerful internet for answers.
9 Years Ago
No harm, no foul! A scientist, I am not. My cleverness lies in other areas. I try to learn something.. read moreNo harm, no foul! A scientist, I am not. My cleverness lies in other areas. I try to learn something every day!
In my case 10% of nothing is nothing. You on the other hand have obvisously found a way to tap into the other 90%, for your poetry is always spot on. Very nice my friend.
Great thoughts, I think I've read something along the same lines from you or another writer on here before. No matter, it is thought provoking and real. In this line it seemed to me that you were either missing an 'a' or, maybe just didn't notice anything off. "Maybe my minds travels went little bit too far" So, after 'went' you need an 'a' or, better yet perhaps, take out 'little' and add 'just a'. Just a suggestion, still a great write.
I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions.
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