10% Crazy

10% Crazy

A Poem by KeelyJane

Maybe I’m crazy; it’s possible I’ve gone mad

Just a tad on the wacky side

A little loony, but not that bad

Perhaps I’ve lost my marbles

Maybe one or two

I wouldn’t be surprised if I had a loose screw

I may be out there beyond the realms of the norm

Possibly deranged

Mentally out of form

A little nuts, A little off

A little bit bizarre

Maybe my minds travels went little bit too far

Unbridled exploration through curiosities and thought

May have people wondering

What sanity I’ve got

If the mind is mostly a mystery and we only use part of our brain

Settling for 10 percent

To me, is what’s insane

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Great thoughts, I think I've read something along the same lines from you or another writer on here before. No matter, it is thought provoking and real. In this line it seemed to me that you were either missing an 'a' or, maybe just didn't notice anything off. "Maybe my minds travels went little bit too far" So, after 'went' you need an 'a' or, better yet perhaps, take out 'little' and add 'just a'. Just a suggestion, still a great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It hard to fathom that we only use 10% of our actual brain mass! I wonder why that is. Perhaps their are areas of the brain that are unsuitable for connectivity. I do not know, just guessing here. There is so much that we do not know; far, surpasses what we do know. But, you are not crazy girl cause I understand you and I am in tip top Freudian shape!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Crimson Bayonet

9 Years Ago

The "we use ten percent of our brain" is completely untrue. In reality, we use one hundred percent o.. read more
Perkele.7885

9 Years Ago

No harm, no foul! A scientist, I am not. My cleverness lies in other areas. I try to learn something.. read more
why stop at 10%???????????????????????

arrgh!
HAI!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it...appreciate it...mah kinda humor

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In my case 10% of nothing is nothing. You on the other hand have obvisously found a way to tap into the other 90%, for your poetry is always spot on. Very nice my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great thoughts, I think I've read something along the same lines from you or another writer on here before. No matter, it is thought provoking and real. In this line it seemed to me that you were either missing an 'a' or, maybe just didn't notice anything off. "Maybe my minds travels went little bit too far" So, after 'went' you need an 'a' or, better yet perhaps, take out 'little' and add 'just a'. Just a suggestion, still a great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely little ditty that flows well and begs a salient question on its way!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm 80% crazy. A very entertaining poem. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We settle for that ten percent, or we go even crazier... This was a fun read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Megadeth sums this up better than I can. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOnKCcjP8Qs

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahaha, I love this. Exactly how I feel. I like your stlye of writing..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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