Life of Blah

I've got bubble gum thoughts and sneaker dreams 

A mouth full of thoughts running on high beams

Black and bruised windows, the fog infested kind

A penny for your thoughts, a dollar to change your mind

Discount all your beliefs, mark up the pleasures of the wrong

Put right into your pocket, the cost to tag along

Lint and silly string are treasures beyond gold

Nonsense and Blah make up the s**t we're told

If it's thought of and serves a purpose, convenience becomes the proof

Question the sanity of everything or the insane becomes the truth

Every one is infected so spread some sparkle with your germs 

Let your mind do your molding, live your life on your own mind's terms

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I am shocked that this does not have more reviews in proportion to the views...it's been scandalously overlooked I think...it's another great piece by you...you've given almost earth-shattering significance to idle things...the blahs you write about are anything but when paired with your poetry :)

[KeelyJane]

Thank you! That means a lot. I have my doubts sometimes about my writing so feedback like this definitely help. :0)

[kublakhan27]

You need not doubt yourself, your writing is just fine :)

[TL Boehm]

Every one is infected so spread some sparkle with your germs

Absolutely. Great line in a great poem

[gombeggar]

u have some very good rhyming schemes and ideas...i'm really enjoying yer work

[Astro]

"Question the sanity of everything or the insane becomes the truth" - If this is not already a quote, it should be. Best line of the poem. Great write.

[Perkele.7885]

concept and thought are here in prevalence and the poem is well put together! However, I must excuse myself from the review process here on the grounds that I have difficulty relating on purely subjective grounds!

[MoriartyMesa]

The word play and theme has a charm that i wish I had.

[Melissa Sofia]

Great poem Keely, love the concept :)

[Frieda P]

The noise is everywhere, I hear you coming through loud and clear in this one. Some very clever lines, this read made me smile, knowingly.

'Lint and silly string are treasures beyond gold'

You've sparkled here. Nice one Keely.

[Jack...]

Sporadic investment of hope and whatever may come. Very cool.