Painted Perfect

Painted Perfect

A Poem by KeelyJane

Through the window it looks so perfect
Picture perfect on display
Outside looking in...

Not so perfect after all
The truth lies within

Inside this facade
A picture merely painted
Truth be told
Behold, the real picture is tainted

© 2013 KeelyJane


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A beautifully dark reflection of the hues and shadows found within. Perhaps perfection is desired more than it should be... sometimes tainted images are much more intriguing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Artwork and poetry was amazing. The good description took the reader to the realistic ending. Few things are perfect. Tainted mean we have lived and tried to know life. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 19, 2013
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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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