Plagiarized

Scribbles and chicken scratches

Lead pencils and ink

Paper lined with torment

The overflowing of what I think

Epiphanies and wonder

Circular nonsense

Straight Forward and subtle

Past and present tense

Words written from the chambers

My feel box filled with sin

With the font of my emotion

I plagiarize my within

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

My mind see's someone in front of a type writer, wanting to throw it, break it, smash it, take the hammer to the keys that won't work. Than after much sweat, grunting and swearing, knowing we are the masters (or Mistresses) of our own universe when it meets paper.

[Perkele.7885]

I plagiarize my within! Are you plagiarizing from yourself? Is that a misdeed and punishable under some unknown law? Then you are guilty by admission! Wait, Let me go get a witness! Your feel box is all filled with sin? Let me get a tape recorder. Be right back. I cannot find nothin' or nobody when I need them. It's another good poem, KeelyJane I enjoyed the read!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Truthful write, with all the work that goes onto paper.

[Astro]

An interesting idea that. Plagiarizing our inner most thoughts and feelings written in the chambers of our hearts and minds. I like this one KJ.

[gombeggar]

excellent wording...this is some good stuff filled with confusion 'chicken scratches' drew me in

[B-poet]

This an emotional piece composed with vast & epic detailed porportions of an engaging eloquence. Used to draw the reader into its meaningful theme dictated by an intriguing title & beginning first stanza. Great work KeelyJane. A uniquely creative write & read. :)

[ClockWork GRIMM]

this was very inspiring and powerful... the only part that made me raise an eyebrow was the 'feel box' part... but... that's not to say it didn't work...

[Britannia]

Yes, I like the last lines too, they kind of startled me.I am going to spend all day pondering them. I just know it! great poem Keely!

[Frieda P]

Ahhh yes, it does feel that way, doesn't it? Love this one Keely, going in my favorites....

[Mark]

"My feel box filled with sin" Wow, that's a great line. :)

Nicely done.