The Seven C's

The Seven C's

A Poem by KeelyJane

Protect the children, their innocence runs deep

Like the valleys of the ocean, where sunken vessels descend to sleep

They are ships embarking a journey amid uncharted waters, far and wide

Our influence is their beacon, our moral compass is their guide

Let them be skipper, captain of their own boat

Be their anchor while in irons, give them the tools to stay afloat

When their voyage is their own, they will sail beyond the reef

May their lessons be learned and their hardships be brief

Send them sailing leeward with the seven c's

Courage, caution, capability, care, character, charisma, and  curiosity

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Amen to that! Great read, this one resonates me since I have three sons and I've tried to instill all these character traits in them, whilst giving them the freedom to be themselves, not an easy job but the most rewarding one on earth! Nice job Keely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I think this is one of your best pieces...every line carries a variety of elements, like philosophy and advice not to mention the poetic elements...and you make it all rhyme seamlessly to boot...very nicely done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love this piece :) really, this is another side of your greatness!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent poem on a very important subject. So well captured. One of your great strengths is being able to vary your style!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is really beautiful, i love it.. i think every parent should read this

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is incredibly poignant and so very lovingly written. i am flabbergasted by the intense beauty of this write. not just the way it is written but the content is gorgeous. awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh Keely this is just amazing!!!! So insightful and full of lovely sentiment!! Your words paint such beautiful pictures... :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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