Ours

Ours

A Poem by KeelyJane

Practice makes perfect

That's good to know

Nobody's perfect

What does that go to show

Never say never

What's that you say?

I did didn't I?

No worries

Everything is A okay

If I've told you once I've told you twice

Third time is a charm

Learn to live, live and learn

Don't make me twist your arm

One day at a time

Everything will be okay

Don't worry be happy

Life is short, live for today

Blah Blah Blah

In one ear and out the other

Here today, gone tommorow

If it's not one thing it's another

All is fair in love and war

What goes around comes around

We get what we give

Oh look what I just found

A penny for your thoughts

No, just save it for a rainy day

A penny saved is a penny...

well you know what they say

It could be worse

Its not half bad at all

The grass is always greener

I have heard it all

Im not complaining

In fact I count my lucky stars

You know what I'm saying...

These words aren't mine, they're ours

© 2013 KeelyJane


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Keely....

Time and again I have been saying that you play with words & play so well.
All the phrases, sentences we might have heard & said many times but you have placed them in right order in telling what you wanted to.

The closure is utterly beautiful "You know what I'm saying...
These words aren't mine, they're ours".

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Its a good collection of lyrics from 80's 90's and even beiber, but what really I like, you creatively connect the dots and make it genuine :) love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a clever piece stiching together all of these common phrases.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love the wording that makes your style unique. I would like a slight suggestion. Word spacing would carry your poetry over the top. You have great flow and I love the way you write however I believe with spacing it would become even more powerful. It is just a suggestion. Love your work and wish you all the best.

Posted 11 Years Ago


My personal favorite is "It's always darkest before the dawn." Lol... love the way you put all these together!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, this is utterly laced with euphemisms and cliche advice...i see the angle you're working here and i heartily applaud your genius. when all in all is said and done...we've only run the race we've run....i love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is my retort to the objections of cliche'. With love.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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