Mystic presence

Mystic presence

A Poem by Nassira
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It is one of these challenges (Tovli's 10/40) ... 10 words to place within 40 words... I tried

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Mystic presence

 

 

 

 

Approaching a mystic perfume in the air…

Enveloping my soul by its splendid presence…

Which left me in an oblivion state!

The sight of an aura purer than glass

In the sky … serene …

I breathed … one… two… God is merciful.

© 2008 Nassira


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Your sense has been overwhelmed by this perfume, and you came into the state of a complete forgetfulness, wonderfully woven lines. Loved it. Thank you also for reviewing my poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


very nicely done, the flow especially. tovli

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nassira, this is beautiful, and a wonderful use of the ten words.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 7, 2008

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Nassira
Nassira

Harrow, London, United Kingdom



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