Questionable occurrence

This is my first time writing a poem with this type of form "rondelet". Nothing wrong with a little challenge once in a while :)

Please No CSS

Questionable occurrence

 

 

 

 

Let me try to understand!

Her head full of unanswered questions…

Let me try to understand!

The scene was hard to comprehend,

All her hard work … her exertions,

Vanished in flames of frustrations.

Let me try to understand!

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

not exactly true to form syllable count is off in places but damn good for first attemp

[The Mad Prophet]

Not bad, I like how you keep presenting yourself with an obsticle. Hopefully you will pass it. Very well done.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

I totally understand where your thoughts were in this one. Perhaps, that because I've experienced by share of frustration. Nice work! :-) Sharon