Unravelled

A Poem by Nassira Merahi

Unravelling, waking, opening, light ...

The sky has been cleared from stuffiness and clutter,

Meanwhile the wind has blown the remaining sputter.

Suddenly the vision freed from stutter

Unravels a world of words to mutter.

The softness of the scene, comparable to butter,

At one time was curtained in a tight shutter,

Reminding a maze of infinite gutter

Shielded by taboos and more... not to utter...

© 2010 Nassira Merahi

Author's Note

personal experience... read and feel

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emmajoy

Dear Nassira .. how wonderful to see words from you here - at last!

How wonderfully you've managed to use the 'utter' word and, by adding an extra letter, created a piece of meaningful and telling writing, ' .. At one time was curtained in a tight shutter,.. '

Write more, find time, please .. I've missed you

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JelliFyshKissUs

And that is why I came for more. Because your words, your visions, the scenic voyage pervade the soul and feel me with emotion. Even as this has as Poe-ish element to it's rhyme, it is all your own.

Posted 14 Years Ago

emmajoy

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 23, 2010
Last Updated on October 23, 2010

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Nassira Merahi

Al bait, the earth, United Kingdom

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I Like to write with a lot of emotion. The sensitive soul that I am, feels a need to let the heart do the talking, whether it rains, shines or snow.... I also enjoy reading other styles of writing. I .. more..