Sometimes

sometimes could lead to different outcomes.......

Sometimes ..........

 

Sometimes, it takes a whole ocean to move a boat.....

But it takes a wave to caress the shore....

Sometimes, it takes the universe to throw a meteor....

But it takes a star to brighten the sky.....

Sometimes it takes a continent to shake its inhabitants....

But it takes an island to gather some shells.....

Sometimes it takes a thunder storm to darken the horizon....

But it takes a sun ray to scatter the clouds.....
Sometimes, it takes a thought to jeopardize a life

But it takes an action to resolve it all ....

 

Only sometimes ........

 

 

Nassira - 2/1/2010

Author's Note

enjoy the enjoyable ....

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Wonderful, wonderful .. every line sets the mind and heart beating stronger.

This poem is an example of how to be, how to think, Nassira .. beautiful

'Sometimes it takes a thunder storm to darken the horizon....
But it takes a sun ray to scatter the clouds..... '

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, this is great! I love the message in your words!

[Khaaki]

deep thoughts ... my favorite line is the last one..

[Tate Morgan]

A sweet thought to be sure
tate

[Tracie Skarbo]

I really like the repeating pattern in this one and the subject matter brought forth...

Sometimes, it takes a whole ocean to move a boat.....
But it takes a wave to caress the shore....

My favorite lines...

[Sheila Kline]

How true!
We may have many "sometimes", but it is the minute, the unexpected that often is that which brings change.
The last line..........

"But it takes an action to resolve it all...."

certainly sums up your thoughts and reasons of consideration!

A thank you to Emma for referring your write!

[An owl on the moon]

Your words so powerfully convey the depth the richness of the world around us! Vividly you show how significance can come through small, soft elements breaking through the darkness. So beautifully done! You life us all...

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Zang! Who are you and why on EARTH are you tugging at my heart strings? GEEZ this is very deep and beautiful work here. Hmm...I think you are definitely reflecting some deep thoughts here. Smooth. I like it!

[cest la vie]

Oh yes, I agree with the other reviewers..
Beautiful and so thought provoking..
Nicely done here:-)

[Samuel Dickens]

Very nice and introspective thoughts you have, Nassira.