proposition of Morality

Just a thought after observing and pondering for a while...

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Proposition of morality

 

 

 

I have awakened myself rather consciously,

Like a rush or a cry of spirituality…

The focus in my mind set aimlessly…

We need a proposition of morality.

 

Barely even touched by the decadence,

Striking generations lost in a trance

Fabricated dreams packaged in abundance

Aware yet… unmoved by aberrance!

 

Immoral behavior launched in a trend,

Infecting the core of our society.

Multifaceted demons to such extend…

The downfall and sprain of our piety.

 

Pretending to oblige to humans pleasures,

Imposing one’s sight with waves of toxicity.

Showing off its pride without any measures,

Falsifying in style … in full complicity.

 

Covering up the heart so its eyes can’t see…

Rendering it so numb by anesthesia.

Closing up the channels conducting to Thee…

Deliberately injecting  doses of “amnesia”!

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great!
Your words are very deep and thoughtful, this poem in not only for a group of people but...it projects the entire mankind and I guess entire world should read about it...Because it is such a truth!
The flow and the rhyme have been maintained so well throughout the read too!
Brilliant piece of writing...

[pal]

Life in distress in control of senses.. true your poem express it all.. to raise above it.

pal

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Being a lover of meter and form, I must first comment that you've done an excellent job in penning this poem. I also found your thoughts deep and meaningful. Excellent work, Nassira. Sharon

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With so much free form going around it is refreshing to read such style and talent. I commend you on the theme, the content and the structure; each stanza speaks a sad truth of what has become the "rule" rather than the exception in a sincere poetic way; simple but, very effective vocabulary.
Man-"unkind" has lost the connection with The One and consequently the channels; in our "selfism" we have lost the purpose as well as the way. Drowning in "self" pity or flying in skies of illusions, "we" have become escapists from our mortality and reality, running forward in a false freedom to our fatal but temporary end; losing virtue along the way and failing badly in the true test of Time.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and observations.
May His Peace and Compassion be upon you and Ramadan Mubarak.

[Samuel Dickens]

Very lyrical and rythmic. As always, your concerns for mankind take center stage. A terrific poem, Nassira.

[Helena]

Very nice indeed Nassira! Very well penned....sentiments spot on.
You've spoken great truth here and your observations of
mankind and the way the world is now is summed up so eloquently
in your amazing poem. I loved it!

Keep pondering more and pen on unceasingly Sister!

Salam :)