Shared thoughts

Just wanted to share some thoughts with you ...

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Shared thoughts ….

 

 

As I walk around observing life living

My mind envisions what it could be

Not to reflect on our surrounding

Not learning how to breathe and thank Thee.

 

As His Signs are here for all to see

Very often one prefers to ignore

Out of rejection, refusing to agree;

Grim reality … our fate still in store.

 

From the tinniest insect with all its hierarchy

To man whom out of greed and lack of spirituality

The earth in submission to God’s decree

Endures the abuse perpetrated on its generosity.

 

Somewhere along the line of generations

We, humans have lost touch … abandoned our wisdom

The wheel is spinning engulfing our vision

Replaced by artificial means … not worth an atom.

 

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You're so right, His signs are here for all of us to see and so many ignore them, rush through life with complete indifference, other priorities in their grasping minds and hands.

'Somewhere along the line of generations
We, humans have lost touch � abandoned our wisdom
The wheel is spinning engulfing our vision
Replaced by artificial means � not worth an atom'

Those lines are so full of wisdom. A real moral.

Thank you for sharing.

(tinniest? think tiniest - hope you don't mind me mentioning) x

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"We, humans have lost touch � abandoned our wisdom "
Oh dear! You are so thoughtful and deep!
The words are quoted just perfectly and are conveying such a deep meaning...I always love reading poems like this..
Awesome thought! :)