Gone With The Wind

Hope over Pain

I simply recalled the times I spent my love with you
It made one of the priciest possessions of my life too
You created waves of inspiration and happiness
And cover all the fears of emptiness

But everything has fallen, you stop loving me
Because your smile and touch have lost its warmth as i see
And I've felt it deeply how it is to live with sorrows
So I just set my heart upon the wonders love can do

Yet I wish I could have loved you forever
but I think that your love once given to me is over
Because someone came in your way
So you left me with pieces of broken heart today

This time you are someone Else's love
We could never be lovers again
But I still wish that we could be best of friends
And let the old days and feelings be gone with the wind

Reviews

[zainul]

Excellent work indeed.
Your message has been expressed well.

You may fine tune the last stanza over time.

[Blue Bella]

thank u for your review.. i find it so overwhelming to receive a compliment from u in spite of the fact that I'm just a newbie.. :) salamat.. ^-^

[zainul]

Salamat,dear poet.:)
I love the poem very much.
It reflects a very serious crisis in human relationship.
Keep up the good zeal,May.

[Blue Bella]

thank you zainul.. i love reading your reviews.. so inspiring as well as your pieces! ^-^