Dancing In The Rain

A twist to a childhood song

The clouds are soaring,

The thunder is roaring,

The lightning exploring,

I'm watching, adoring,

It's raining,

It's pouring,

Then I'm dancing in the rain.

Author's Note

Mai first everr poem!! What does the world think?
Please don't be shy to comment and critique!!

<3

Reviews

[deepblue04]

I enjoy it! I imagined everything that your poem said

[Whiskurz]

I thought your first ever poem is a winner.....Great first write.....Whisk