written in blood

Tragic first

It's 3a.m., the streets are still
Everyone's sleeping except for Danny and Jill
They're stuck in the passion, just can't let go
"I love you", he said, as he put it in slow

She held him tight, squirmed and moaned
He kept going faster, pumped and groaned
She gasped and yelled, he stopped in one beat
Pulled out from inside her and jumped to his feat

She rolled over in pain, cried and yelled
He took a whiff of his hand, blood is what he smelled
He tried to calm her, but the crying continued
He started to panic in fear of how he'd be viewed

Danny grabbed a pillow to muffle the sound
Jill kicked him violently, he hit the ground
He sat on her belly and covered her face
Resulting in her motions severely slowing in pace

The crying stopped and Danny sighed
Little did he know that Jill had died
He lifted the pillow, and was shocked to see
His girlfriend dead, and decided to flee

Now 5a.m. Danny sits at home
With his 357 that's coated in chrome
Put the gun to his head and begins to shiver
His fidgeting finger accidentally pulls the trigger

When police find her, they look for him
Walking into a scene that's very grim
They find his note with a bunch of crud
Every single word is written in blood

Author's Note

Ignore grammar, but be brutal.

Reviews

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Hell yeah! Diggin it! very nice!!