First day, our point

Nobody's point of view:::

 

 

Katalina, Maddy, and Lacey observed the students shuffling through the hallway.

Maddy saw a cute boy passing through the hallway, and turned to Lacey.

The boy looked confused.

Maddy and Katalina had boyfriends, but Lacey didnt.

"Hey Lacey, you should totally go over there and ask that guy, if he's having trouble.." Maddy said.

Lacey was shy around guys, and never really talked to them.

"Um.. I dont think I will.. Im gonna have to pass.." Lacey spoke in a whisper.

"Uh! Be right back.." Maddy said, and jogged over to the guy.

"MADDY NO!" Lacey cried out, with a mumble.

"Hey you!" Maddy said, "Me and my friends were wondering, if you needed any help?" she continued seriously.

Lacey's blush faded away, and when Katalina rushed over, Lacey stayed, by herself.

The guy shot a glance at her.

Lacey was more of paying attention to what was in her locker.

* * *

Jason ran over to Maddy.

"HI MADDY!!!" Jason said.

He is Maddy's overlyobsessed boyfriend.

* * *

The guy shuffled up to Lacey slowly..

He started.. To smell Lacey.

"WHAT THE??" Lacey yelled, pushing the guy away.

The guy jumped back, and sniffed Lacey once again.

"DUDE! LEAVE ME ALONE!" she said.

Maddy walked over and said, "Dude, beat it.."
"I--I'm sorry.." the guy said.

"Lacey wont be mad, if you tell her why you did that.." Katalina said, walking up.

"Well, Um.. Uh.. Her shampoo, it smells good." said the guy, "Im Seth.." he continued.

"Im Maddy, this is Katalina," Maddy said, pressing one hand on Kat's shoulder, "And this, is Lacey." Maddy said, pressing another hand on Lacey's shoulder.

 

 

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I like this so far.
It's interesting and kind of humorous.
I love the characters already. They've got awesome personalities.
I look forward to reading the rest of this.

By the way my name's Elissa. I hope you accept my friend request :)