Mystery Love

My heart bleeds, my soul's been stained with sorrow and loneliness, how can I miss so much someone whom I’ve never meet before. I crave her love, lust for her touch, even to simply see her face would be enough. I want to know who this mystery girl who has stolen my heart is. I have never seen her yet I love her so much it’s unbearable. I know she’s out there some where, waiting for me to take her to happily ever after.

Author's Note

Hi! It's my first. Any constructive review would be fine.

Reviews

[asterix]

it's a good poem. 65 percent. I think you should put it in for the poetic infusion contest

[twain carey]

It's a good poem. Hope you find this your mystery lady.

[McKinleyA]

Very good! I can really relate to this one.