Darkness of the night!

I made this when I was at school for an assignment.

Walking in the street, beauty in the sky.

Looking at the lights, as you pass by.

 

Darkness is filling the atmospere!

 

As the sun rises, light floods the lands.

As everyone waits for the darkness, again!

 

Darkness of the night!

Reviews

[Madara Uchiha]

strong powerful short i like it alot.

[WordMaster]

What a powerful, emotional poem

It displays more feelings then poems twice it size

The pace and tone of the poem is perfect for the story line presented

Well done