As I move forward

As I move forward

A Poem by hunglikejesus
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Just my view on Black people and our struggles to get somewhere.

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As I move forward down the hallway as black as pitch with no perspective my only bearing up or down, I move forward darkness behind and I am right.

As I move forward down this hallway as black as pitch with no perspective my only bearing up or down, the line has no finish and I search for one.

As I move forward down this hallway as black as pitch with no perspective my only bearing up or down, I look to be seen and nothing sees me, my perspective is none and have only to move forward.

As we move forward down this hallway as black as pitch with no perspective our only bearing up or down, we move forward, momentum our only fuel, we move as one, until one can only move, we see light but it is not ours. And we move forward.

As I move forward down this hallway as black as pitch with no perspective my only bearing up or down, is like the throat of doom, but my fate is not sealed, I continue to move forward, with no perspective, hope my only bearing as I move forward.

© 2012 hunglikejesus


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hunglikejesus
be patience as I get through this.

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I like this. I could these words translating well into song lyrics. It had a really nice lyrical flow to it. Keep writing!

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hunglikejesus
hunglikejesus

Lilburn, GA



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Just a simple person who's brain has been rewired by my depression. A friend told me that I had a talent for expression and I just started writing and here I be. I am by no means a writer, I have neve.. more..

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