Gaze

Gaze

A Poem by tynamite

Noticed in the room
Lingering in the minds
Attention is pulled
Towards a single point

Chatting to a person
Predictable smiles
People around linger
Drawn like flies

The glow that is there
Radiates even more
Proximity is needed
To wear fluorescent glasses

Floating in the air
Caught in the breeze
People wherever I spin
Transfixed in their gaze

© 2012 tynamite


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#33
It's like Oprah. But nevermind the fine print. I wasn't born yesterday.

Posted 7 Years Ago


tynamite

7 Years Ago

I don't watch Oprah. How is it like Oprah?
#33

7 Years Ago

Lots of "O"s written in plain text. Makes it easier to read.
I think the flow is weird. Idk. something about it just seemed off.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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 Added on February 12, 2012
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tynamite
tynamite

Birmingham, England, United Kingdom



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Hello peepz! I write novels and short stories in the "urban life" genre going for the "thought provoking" style. You could call it realism, but even romance and crime novels can be realistic, so I.. more..

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